Jesus, Ann... you write in kaleidoscopic cinemascope... these are just dazzling visuals... intertwined by complex sociological evolutions that resulted in this world... seriously... how did this come to you? this is like a fully realized post-apocalyptic fever dream.... are your dreams this vivid?
my dreams are usually North Koreans charging across the DMZ like swarming rats in a plague....
other suggestion... 3 free chapters... bundle the rest into your novel... and by the time your have the legal angle ironed out you might be able to sell it in digital...
but seriously.... I wouldn't leave the whole novel online....
Jesus, Ann... you write in kaleidoscopic cinemascope... these are just dazzling visuals... intertwined by complex sociological evolutions that resulted in this world... seriously... how did this come to you? this is like a fully realized post-apocalyptic fever dream.... are your dreams this vivid?
my dreams are usually North Koreans charging across the DMZ like swarming rats in a plague....
Usually they're about being robbed
My dreams are terrifying!
other suggestion... 3 free chapters... bundle the rest into your novel... and by the time your have the legal angle ironed out you might be able to sell it in digital...
but seriously.... I wouldn't leave the whole novel online....